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Suicide Wars Intro

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Damen stood in a field not knowing how he got to this place, There were many different flowers, mostly blue, every square inch of this field. The sky shone a silver color as the clouds hid the sun like a blanket. He heard water in the distance and turned around. Standing teen feet away was a girl, she had long chocolate brown hair that flowed in the wind. Her back was facing him but something about her mesmerized him. She noticed his presence  and started turning slowly. Her eyes were a brown color but something was wrong with them, they looked empty.

Damen shuddered as her hollow eyes pierced his soul. Another adjective floated through his mind to describe her unusual eyes. Dead. Her pale lips moved into words but he couldn't hear them. He watched in horror as her pale body took a step backward to where the field abruptly stopped followed by a six story drop. She looked up at him her eyes having a sense of plead.

Damen took a step foreword as something wrapped itself around her. Her lips moved into a shriek as she struggled against the darkness that was swallowing her up whole. She outreached a hand toward him, flesh blood dripping on the ground in front of him.

Damen felt his feet run foreword as he stretched his hand out trying to reach her. He watched in horror as blood dripped from her cheek as the darkness took her more away. He gripped her hand as tight as he could, the darkness crawling onto his skin. He watched her disappear completely and the darkness viscously ripped him away from her fragile hand.
Umm so yeah. I'm probably never going to finish this story

My friend in real life will only understand this part
This is Damen narrating what goes on a lot in my brain. It's actually a guy part too o.0
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NeverBreakAnAngel's avatar
It's good! I like it! FINISH IT!

Or at least let me know where you want to go with this. Maybe I can help you...?